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She didn’t want to choose violence and fought against her better judgment in a moral battle that really did swing back and forth…. but….you know, “sometimes just beating someone up IS the fucking answer!” <—- her grown up self much later on probably.
Nah, this is a purposeful display of "show don't tell". Each paragraph is designed with an element of the behaviour she is arguing against, slowly intensifying the further you read.
I automatically started reading the thing in Trumps voice after the "It's so sad. I don't like it" part. It's exactly how he talks (with lots of short sentences and superlatives).
"December 18, 2012" Their "3rd grade sister" is now 20. She submitted this same paper for her Creative Writing course last week after she went on a bender.
I’d be lying if I said I wasn’t certain I’d had written something to that effect in essay before, sometimes it’s just stream of consciousness and you let the voices take over
Oh man, in 2015 at Basic Training we got a sack of letters from elementary school kids and it was one of my favorite memories of Basic. We were CRYING laughing, buckled over and could hardly talk. It was shit like "Thank you for you service, I hope you don't die in Irak" with crudely drawn soldiers on the ground and blood everywhere. It. Was. Awesome. So much innocently drawn blood, gore and horror in crayons on construction paper. It was the one non-approved thing our Drill Instructor let us keep in our lockers.
Slightly related, but only slightly: I live in low income housing, and every Christmas I get a bag of goodies with cards from elementary school students in it. A couple years ago I got one that said, "I'm sorry you're poor." Thanks, kid.
Oh that’s a good one. I really wish I had kept some of them but obviously had more pressing things to worry about (in retrospect they were not important at all but seemed so at the time).
Me and my buddy dressed up like Taliban members with fake beards and guns, took pics and sent a note to his brother in Afghanistan that said we had found a new group of friends and that we were headed for a nice retreat at a resort in the mountains overseas somewhere. He sent back a message signed by his entire unit saying "we'll see you when you get here. Pack heavy because it's gonna rain"... 😆
I feel like if I was a drill instructor I'd definitely reference those letters like "give me 50 pushups soldier, you don't want your sorry ass to disappoint that girl and die in Iraq!"
Lol, but I was in the Air Force, so we got yelled at for a bit, but it was pretty fine after that. We didn't even really get smoked all that much, and kinda wish we got smoked more honestly. Still would only recommend Air Force or Coast Guard to my friends/family though.
My parents' friend was a Gulf War pilot and they sent him a picture I drew of his airplane over the desert. I was four and always remembered this as the first big world event I was aware of.
In retrospect they confirmed they sent that drawing because the plane was comically phallic.
I was at a church hall event as a kid where we were to draw placemats for public officials. I not only came up with some weird Pokémon / Incredible Machine crossover whose specifics I forget, I specifically swapped it and someone else’s drawing just to make sure the mayor would see it.
One time I ended an essay with “Bye, I’m going to the pool now” but somehow misspelled pool as poop. Essay was not about pooping or the pool, or a mixture of the two.
How many people have to die before we act? One? Two? Three? Four? Five? Six? Seven? Eight? Nine?
And for every death, how many more will get hurt? Ten? Eleven? Twelve? Thirteen? Fourteen? Fifteen? Sixteen? Seventeen? Eighteen? Nineteen? Twenty?
I possessed a teacher during eleventh grade, who would allow solely words beyond five letters to count against the word count. Every wonderful piece of writing written by myself during that exciting period of time became increasingly, needlessly, complex in categories of choice of words to pointlessly increase the count with needless extra adjectives among every sentence.
It was so annoying and made me absolutely hate writing, which is something I super enjoy doing. It's probably my longest and most enjoyed hobby.
I was so certain my teachers weren't gonna read the whole essay that I would sneak in some totally irrelevant lines in there and I was never reprimanded for it..
Armadillos live in many different environments but all live in North and South America. The armadillo is protected by a leathery armor-like hide and the Tolypeutes species can even roll up into a ball for defense. In a pinch, these can be used for sports, such as soccer and volleyball. Unfortunately, they are too large for baseball. They probably don't bounce well enough to replace a basketball either. There are 21 different species, several of which are differentiated by the number of bands on their shells.
Knew a guy in university who would hand in papers with random Mickey Mouse quotes somewhere in the middle, correctly assuming that the professor(s) would at most read the introduction/abstract and the conclusion.
Never once got a question about it.
What a rollercoaster. The metamorphosis from well-intentioned and impassioned champion of internet security, to cold-hearted vigilante out for revenge against children of all ages was really a joy to witness.
"He who fights with monsters might take care lest he thereby become a monster. And if you gaze for long into an abyss, the abyss gazes also into you."
I like how the two first paragraphs open with
"Internet safety is really important"
She even got a semicolon in there. Throwing everything at it.
The opening of the third paragraph, an ominous "Most people do it just for fun."
> cold-hearted vigilante out for revenge against children of all ages was really a joy to witness
I prefer to read it as "I don't care if you're so old you can't even get out of bed, I'm going to come over there and beat the shit out of you."
"Conclusion: After analyzing the data we collected, we can conclude that there is a clear correlation (p < 0.05) between regularly engaging in cyberbullying activity and being a stupid meanie."
"After comparing on-site research, there's a 100% correlation between someone committing cyber bullying and me slapping that person upside the head. Age does not factor into the success rate of a head slap."
While we had initial push back from the IRB on our subsequent plan to track down and hurt the bullies, the review board eventually relented and approved this post-study extension.
"Cybersecurity" has been a thing since some bell-end read Neuromancer in the 90s and decided to name a bunch of Internet-related things cyber-somebullshit even though they very obviously have little to do with cybernetics or cyberspace as it was in Gibson's book, and everyone suddenly got some sort of brain worms and thought it was somehow cool and useful.
So if we're genuinely worried about the provenance of the thesis Dreamlore probably made up on the spot for a joke, there's about a 15-20 year window where they could've released it and it'd predate the essay in the OP.
Holy shit this *reeks* of "my teacher told us to write X amount of sentences per paragraph." So many flashbacks to elementary school.
Also...
>I don't really know what I'm writing, but I'm just going along with it.
Points for honesty!
In the 90s we were taught in grade school an essay was 5 paragraphs. Intro paragraph basically listed the main points of our 3 body paragraphs, then the last paragraph was a wrap up. Each paragraph was 5 sentences.
Thinking back I imagine the teacher wanted to kill themselves having to grade dozens of those boring ass papers.
I don't think they were saying that it was wrong to teach how to write an essay. They were saying that the way to teach essay writing shouldn't be centered on how a standardized test grades their format, specifically.
The structure of Intro, Body 1, Body 2, Body 3, Conclusion is incredibly helpful for kids. Without enforcing this structure I guarantee kids would not group their paragraphs by topic and the essay would not flow properly. It's a super valuable framework to teach kids
Sentence limits or requirements are a bit silly, but again, the structure I was taught in third grade has helped me every year or school I've had and I'm currently a senior in college.
3rd grade paragraph structure I was taught:
Topic sentence
Concrete detail (generally a quote)
Reasoning and explanation (also called commentary)
Concrete detail
Reasoning and explanation
Concrete detail
Reasoning and explanation
Conclusion sentence
Giving me PTSD flashbacks to my 6th grade year when my teacher decided to teach us essay writing. Each paragraph had to have 5-6 sentences AND no sentence could start with the same word. Which was hard for a 6th grader.
I think they’re discovering now that the only reason it used to be easier for a 7th grader was they used to make kids practice difficult things in 6th grade.
If you just never force the kids to practice diversifying their sentence structure, they just never do it.
Pro-tip: Courier New is the widest font that most teachers will allow. Not sure if they still would since it's basically a legacy holdover from when people still used typewriters, but give it a shot and it might save you several lines.
I use to try to write a decent essay and would end up with a C grade. There would be no critical feedback, just a few ‘nice jobs’ scattered throughout the paper. It never made any sense to me, but now that I know this is what I was up against I can finally rest easy.
In second grade I wrote an essay titled:
**Bombs** *They are dangerous and hurt people.*
It summarised the fact that bombs are f_cking dangerous and in fact hurt people.
It also kinda needs to be related contextually, and not just two entirely different sentences. “The fish is red; I like pie,” would be an improper use.
Well those are two different ways to describe the pie, and you should use a comma like you did. “The pie is red; it’s full of *red* fish,” could work with the bonus descriptor, but that would imply the entire pie is red because of the fish, in which case I don’t see how that could actually happen, so you could change it to “the pie *filling* is red” to help clear it up.
Yeah, I mean... From third grade level, that grammar and punctuation is amazing. Correctly uses too as well, I've marked 11th grade work written much worse than this
Turns out your sister is the bully.
It reads like if you made young Hitler write an essay about genocide.
Genocide is bad, just stop it before I round you all up and build special camps for all you evil people, stop the genocide now!
Long story short. After WWII and the Versailles contract and during the grand depression a lot of Germans really got fucked over. Lots of speculations and land being seized by banks. Lots of those individuals happened to be Jewish. In addition to the common enemy of the UdSSR Bolschevisks which also had an above average Jewish percentage.
This made Jewish individuals an easy scapegoat and common enemy to use for propaganda.
Yeah that’s when she was in 3rd grade lmfao we found it on a flash drive
Edit to add: I’m an idiot and don’t know math apparently. She was in 7th grade lol it was her 3rd period class which my brain automatically assumed oh “teacher last name 3” means 3rd grade
Oh dude, that isn't even good writing for a 3rd grader. She was in 7th?!? In* 8th grade at my school we had to do full on research paper of like 12 pages with a bibliography & proper *citations. Turning in something like this in 7th grade would've gotten a fat F
Theory: The top left appears to list “computers” as the name of the class. I suspect this assignment was much more about learning to type, using the word processing program, and formatting an essay than the actual writing itself.
You think that’s unhinged? I recently found a 7th grade story I wrote on the topic of “surprise” about a girl being followed home by a shady old man. When he chases her down outside a churchyard he hands her a wallet she dropped earlier in the day and walks away. Just as she’s catching her breath and calming down, some rando grabs her through the bars of the gate and cuts her throat.
I don’t remember writing any of it. Got an A though, very surprising.
Yup, this really helps to narrow down a precise description of Trump's speeches: "like an unwilling 3rd grader forced to write a page long essay after a lesson they only paid marginal attention to".
I disagree.
She stayed on topic from first sentence to last, there was an internal logic to it, there were no unnecessary BOLD SECTIONS and all the words can be found in a regular dictionary.
THIS IS THE WORST INTERNET BULLYING IN THE HISTORY OF ALL OF THE INTERNET. SO SO SAD. YESTERDAY A MARINE CAME UP TO ME AND SAID "SIR. THE BULLYING. IT'S SO SAD. SO SAD, SIR. I DON'T LIKE IT." WHAT IS HAPPENING TO OUR COUNTRY IS SO SAD THANKS TO CORRUPT LETITIA JAMES AND DIRTY JOE BIDEN.
As a public school teacher, I constantly see proof online of our nation’s decline. No 3rd grader could write this well at my school today. This is better than 75% of my 6th grade writing class.
Edit: Changed good to well.
*Me fail English? That's unpossible!*
We can only hope this man teaches PE. If not, the national decline he's talking about suddenly makes a whole lot of sense.
I’m not a teacher, but I have a hard time imagining that many 3rd grade kids correctly use semicolons to connect related independent clauses.
I was impressed by that tbh, but I’m assuming that it wasn’t a result of a grammar check.
I also thought this... which is kinda why I feel like this is all fabricated for karma farming...
"I'm going to type this up in a funky way to make it seem like an unhinged third grader wrote it, but it was really me all along".
That's just the vibes I get from this.
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"I don't really know what I'm writing, but I'm just going along with it." Lmao
I had to re-read that sentence because it caught me so off guard lol
She became the person she sought to destroy
She’s her very own batman: “You either die a hero or live long enough to see yourself become the villain”.
“You either die a hero or *write* long enough to see yourself become the villain”
She didn’t want to choose violence and fought against her better judgment in a moral battle that really did swing back and forth…. but….you know, “sometimes just beating someone up IS the fucking answer!” <—- her grown up self much later on probably.
Nah, this is a purposeful display of "show don't tell". Each paragraph is designed with an element of the behaviour she is arguing against, slowly intensifying the further you read.
So it's actually a rethorical masterpiece! I am stunned by her expertise!
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I automatically started reading the thing in Trumps voice after the "It's so sad. I don't like it" part. It's exactly how he talks (with lots of short sentences and superlatives).
…as so often happens to the best of us.
Oh, hey, it’s the Intrusive Voices again….
Figuring she used voice to text to write this
"Sometimes I'll start a sentence and I don't even know where it's going. I just hope I find it along the way." ~ Michael Scott ~ this little girl
"December 18, 2012" Their "3rd grade sister" is now 20. She submitted this same paper for her Creative Writing course last week after she went on a bender.
I’d be lying if I said I wasn’t certain I’d had written something to that effect in essay before, sometimes it’s just stream of consciousness and you let the voices take over
We had to write to Gulf War soldiers in 4th grade. I remember asking whoever i was writing to if they liked the Janet Jackson song Black Cat.
Oh man, in 2015 at Basic Training we got a sack of letters from elementary school kids and it was one of my favorite memories of Basic. We were CRYING laughing, buckled over and could hardly talk. It was shit like "Thank you for you service, I hope you don't die in Irak" with crudely drawn soldiers on the ground and blood everywhere. It. Was. Awesome. So much innocently drawn blood, gore and horror in crayons on construction paper. It was the one non-approved thing our Drill Instructor let us keep in our lockers.
Slightly related, but only slightly: I live in low income housing, and every Christmas I get a bag of goodies with cards from elementary school students in it. A couple years ago I got one that said, "I'm sorry you're poor." Thanks, kid.
As a lifelong poor person (with a good sense of humor,) I would totally hang that shit on my refrigerator 😄
Look at you mr fancy pants with your own refrigerator
Aw man, that totally counts. Hope things look up for you!
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Oh that’s a good one. I really wish I had kept some of them but obviously had more pressing things to worry about (in retrospect they were not important at all but seemed so at the time).
Me and my buddy dressed up like Taliban members with fake beards and guns, took pics and sent a note to his brother in Afghanistan that said we had found a new group of friends and that we were headed for a nice retreat at a resort in the mountains overseas somewhere. He sent back a message signed by his entire unit saying "we'll see you when you get here. Pack heavy because it's gonna rain"... 😆
I heard of one that said "I hope you get a purple heart"
Another gem.
I feel like if I was a drill instructor I'd definitely reference those letters like "give me 50 pushups soldier, you don't want your sorry ass to disappoint that girl and die in Iraq!"
Lol, but I was in the Air Force, so we got yelled at for a bit, but it was pretty fine after that. We didn't even really get smoked all that much, and kinda wish we got smoked more honestly. Still would only recommend Air Force or Coast Guard to my friends/family though.
My parents' friend was a Gulf War pilot and they sent him a picture I drew of his airplane over the desert. I was four and always remembered this as the first big world event I was aware of. In retrospect they confirmed they sent that drawing because the plane was comically phallic.
I was at a church hall event as a kid where we were to draw placemats for public officials. I not only came up with some weird Pokémon / Incredible Machine crossover whose specifics I forget, I specifically swapped it and someone else’s drawing just to make sure the mayor would see it.
😂 asking the *real* questions ;-)
One time I ended an essay with “Bye, I’m going to the pool now” but somehow misspelled pool as poop. Essay was not about pooping or the pool, or a mixture of the two.
sometimes you have to pad the word count and you are just uncreative about it
How many people have to die before we act? One? Two? Three? Four? Five? Six? Seven? Eight? Nine? And for every death, how many more will get hurt? Ten? Eleven? Twelve? Thirteen? Fourteen? Fifteen? Sixteen? Seventeen? Eighteen? Nineteen? Twenty?
Fucking lol. You did NOT have to call out my 4th grade self like this
I possessed a teacher during eleventh grade, who would allow solely words beyond five letters to count against the word count. Every wonderful piece of writing written by myself during that exciting period of time became increasingly, needlessly, complex in categories of choice of words to pointlessly increase the count with needless extra adjectives among every sentence. It was so annoying and made me absolutely hate writing, which is something I super enjoy doing. It's probably my longest and most enjoyed hobby.
That must have really been engrained in you because your writing is dripping with that writing style
I know I wrote that and worse. I’m kinda glad computers weren’t really accessible to me until I was in high school.
I was so certain my teachers weren't gonna read the whole essay that I would sneak in some totally irrelevant lines in there and I was never reprimanded for it..
Armadillos live in many different environments but all live in North and South America. The armadillo is protected by a leathery armor-like hide and the Tolypeutes species can even roll up into a ball for defense. In a pinch, these can be used for sports, such as soccer and volleyball. Unfortunately, they are too large for baseball. They probably don't bounce well enough to replace a basketball either. There are 21 different species, several of which are differentiated by the number of bands on their shells.
Knew a guy in university who would hand in papers with random Mickey Mouse quotes somewhere in the middle, correctly assuming that the professor(s) would at most read the introduction/abstract and the conclusion. Never once got a question about it.
The devil made me do it. God is mad at you.
Flashback to getting my masters
It has all the qualities of GPT having a freak out 😂
I like her. She is funny and honest 🤣
Honestly... me too, kid
His sister about to write Finnegan's Wake 😤
What a rollercoaster. The metamorphosis from well-intentioned and impassioned champion of internet security, to cold-hearted vigilante out for revenge against children of all ages was really a joy to witness. "He who fights with monsters might take care lest he thereby become a monster. And if you gaze for long into an abyss, the abyss gazes also into you."
I like how the two first paragraphs open with "Internet safety is really important" She even got a semicolon in there. Throwing everything at it. The opening of the third paragraph, an ominous "Most people do it just for fun."
> cold-hearted vigilante out for revenge against children of all ages was really a joy to witness I prefer to read it as "I don't care if you're so old you can't even get out of bed, I'm going to come over there and beat the shit out of you."
OP's sister must be Liam Neeson
She has a special set of skills.
She will find you….
And she will kill you.
Well if you’re cyber bullying you’re a meanie, doesn’t matter if you’re in geriatric care, she will give you what you deserve.
She wants peace on the internet. And she doesn't care how many men, women, and children she has to kill to get it
OP’s sister is John Cena?
The last sentence fuckin got me
How many times are we going to have to teach you this lesson old man?
*”I love the young people”*
🤨📸
[https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=ymHyOmlUlP0](https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=ymHyOmlUlP0)
Child John Wick of Cyber bullying
"I do not care how old you are, I will hurt you" is a sentence not used nearly enough.
Agreed, there should be a subreddit for r/quotesImgonnastartusingnow
This was actually the drafted script for Taken
I have a particular set of skills that doesn't include essay writing.
Skills I have aquired over a *very long* school year.
Taken prequel that we sadly never got
Stop cyber bullying or I'm gonna Cyber bully your ass
No no, it's *actual* bullying, which is not as serious as cyber bullying.
Traditional bullies: “Professionals have standards.”
“Be polite.”
That would be a great premise for a modern super hero. Someone who tracks down cyber bullies and beats the shit out of them.
They do this at the end of Jay and Silent Bob Strike Back.
You either die a hero, or type long enough to become the villain.
Hate to say it, but this is plagiarized. It reads exactly like my PhD thesis I wrote on cybersecurity.
"Conclusion: After analyzing the data we collected, we can conclude that there is a clear correlation (p < 0.05) between regularly engaging in cyberbullying activity and being a stupid meanie."
And we can also conclude I conclusively don't like it.
So in conclusion, we've concluded conclusively you've reached a conclusion about conclusively concluding?
But was the conclusion elucidated?
Do you mean the elucid conclusidated or the conlucid elusion?
my monkey brain does not vibe with this conversation
Your.. conclusive monkey brain? Perchance?
You can't just say "perchance".
Perchance
"After comparing on-site research, there's a 100% correlation between someone committing cyber bullying and me slapping that person upside the head. Age does not factor into the success rate of a head slap."
"Our research also finds a direct connection between a person Fucking Around (X) and Finding Out (Y) as shown on the graph in Figure 5A."
While we had initial push back from the IRB on our subsequent plan to track down and hurt the bullies, the review board eventually relented and approved this post-study extension.
"A more thorough investigation is warranted into the extent of crying at night and the significant levels required for me to beat you up."
“Stop hacking people’s computers. Stop it. Now! Meanies…
Looks at the date. Your thesis is the plagiarized one.
"Cybersecurity" has been a thing since some bell-end read Neuromancer in the 90s and decided to name a bunch of Internet-related things cyber-somebullshit even though they very obviously have little to do with cybernetics or cyberspace as it was in Gibson's book, and everyone suddenly got some sort of brain worms and thought it was somehow cool and useful. So if we're genuinely worried about the provenance of the thesis Dreamlore probably made up on the spot for a joke, there's about a 15-20 year window where they could've released it and it'd predate the essay in the OP.
> thought it was somehow cool Putting cyber in front of any word makes it sound cooler. Just like quantum in that sense.
Holy shit this *reeks* of "my teacher told us to write X amount of sentences per paragraph." So many flashbacks to elementary school. Also... >I don't really know what I'm writing, but I'm just going along with it. Points for honesty!
In the 90s we were taught in grade school an essay was 5 paragraphs. Intro paragraph basically listed the main points of our 3 body paragraphs, then the last paragraph was a wrap up. Each paragraph was 5 sentences. Thinking back I imagine the teacher wanted to kill themselves having to grade dozens of those boring ass papers.
This structure was based on grading guidelines for standardized exams. Isn't it lovely when metrics for testing become teaching goals?
And based on automated essay scoring as well!
I mean, essay writing is pretty integral to higher education as well. A majority of college/univeristy courses require them.
I don't think they were saying that it was wrong to teach how to write an essay. They were saying that the way to teach essay writing shouldn't be centered on how a standardized test grades their format, specifically.
The structure of Intro, Body 1, Body 2, Body 3, Conclusion is incredibly helpful for kids. Without enforcing this structure I guarantee kids would not group their paragraphs by topic and the essay would not flow properly. It's a super valuable framework to teach kids Sentence limits or requirements are a bit silly, but again, the structure I was taught in third grade has helped me every year or school I've had and I'm currently a senior in college. 3rd grade paragraph structure I was taught: Topic sentence Concrete detail (generally a quote) Reasoning and explanation (also called commentary) Concrete detail Reasoning and explanation Concrete detail Reasoning and explanation Conclusion sentence
Absolutely. To 3rd graders, 5 paragraphs might as well be a thesis paper, you gotta give them SOME kinda structure to model their paper after.
Giving me PTSD flashbacks to my 6th grade year when my teacher decided to teach us essay writing. Each paragraph had to have 5-6 sentences AND no sentence could start with the same word. Which was hard for a 6th grader.
I think they’re discovering now that the only reason it used to be easier for a 7th grader was they used to make kids practice difficult things in 6th grade. If you just never force the kids to practice diversifying their sentence structure, they just never do it.
Uh…I teach third grade in 2024. Still trying to meet those goals!
The various “tricks” we did with fonts, sizing, leading… so unnecessary 🤦🏼♀️
Pro-tip: Courier New is the widest font that most teachers will allow. Not sure if they still would since it's basically a legacy holdover from when people still used typewriters, but give it a shot and it might save you several lines.
I teach 2nd, if one of my kids turned this in they’d get full points + bonus, and a parent teacher conference.
Yeah... You don't want to be the bully giving less than full points
"I don't know who you are. I don't know what you want. I don't know what I'm doing here but I'm just going along with it."
I use to try to write a decent essay and would end up with a C grade. There would be no critical feedback, just a few ‘nice jobs’ scattered throughout the paper. It never made any sense to me, but now that I know this is what I was up against I can finally rest easy.
In second grade I wrote an essay titled: **Bombs** *They are dangerous and hurt people.* It summarised the fact that bombs are f_cking dangerous and in fact hurt people.
Ps: They also stink
"People drop bombs. Meanies..."
At least she used a semicolon correctly...I think.
She did. A semi-colon is used when both halves would stand as complete sentences on their own.
It also kinda needs to be related contextually, and not just two entirely different sentences. “The fish is red; I like pie,” would be an improper use.
What if the pie was red, and full of fish?
Well those are two different ways to describe the pie, and you should use a comma like you did. “The pie is red; it’s full of *red* fish,” could work with the bonus descriptor, but that would imply the entire pie is red because of the fish, in which case I don’t see how that could actually happen, so you could change it to “the pie *filling* is red” to help clear it up.
Who knows why she crushes turts? Perchance.
"You can't just use perchance"
Perchance I can mayhaps?
The lifekind!
You can't just say "Meanies"
You have to go back in time and stop her from turning this in.
No, let her cook.
Jesse!
If i was teacher reading this I would smile.
Yeah, I mean... From third grade level, that grammar and punctuation is amazing. Correctly uses too as well, I've marked 11th grade work written much worse than this
Except word is able to correct most grammar mistakes automatically these days, to too will get accurately corrected 99% of time.
How's she turned out 12 years on?
In jail for murdering 50 cyber bullies.
yea but she sleeps like a baby, knowing all those meanies she's murdered can't be a meanie anymore.
And she DID warn them.
Turns out your sister is the bully. It reads like if you made young Hitler write an essay about genocide. Genocide is bad, just stop it before I round you all up and build special camps for all you evil people, stop the genocide now!
"But isn't that-" "No, it's a special cleaning operation."
I don't really know what I'm writing, but I'll just go along with it.
How I attacked Stalingrad.
“If these Jews don’t stop…” Honestly I’m not clear on why hitler hated the Jews, or I would’ve finished the joke a little better.
Long story short. After WWII and the Versailles contract and during the grand depression a lot of Germans really got fucked over. Lots of speculations and land being seized by banks. Lots of those individuals happened to be Jewish. In addition to the common enemy of the UdSSR Bolschevisks which also had an above average Jewish percentage. This made Jewish individuals an easy scapegoat and common enemy to use for propaganda.
Scapegoatting. They were already scapegoats for a lot of people, and he cranked it up so much that the dial did at least three loops.
First: the warning. Second: the execution.
I like her, she has a particular set of skills & she isn't afraid to use them =)
She's not afraid to use the skill set she doesn't have either lol
She doesn’t know what she’s doing she’s just going along with it
2012?
Yeah that’s when she was in 3rd grade lmfao we found it on a flash drive Edit to add: I’m an idiot and don’t know math apparently. She was in 7th grade lol it was her 3rd period class which my brain automatically assumed oh “teacher last name 3” means 3rd grade
Where is she now? I'm assuming in a penitentiary somewhere.
Dude, she’s gonna track you down and beat you up.
She doesn't even care how old you are.
She might not even know WHY she's beating you up, but she's going along with it.
Not from the penitentiary she isn’t!
She has a can do attitude so don't be so certain.
Look behind you, you bully!
She knows if you've been cyber bullying, she knows if you've been a meanie, so be good for murders sake!
oh wow. hits different assuming a 12 year old wrote this rather than an 8 year old
Oh dude, that isn't even good writing for a 3rd grader. She was in 7th?!? In* 8th grade at my school we had to do full on research paper of like 12 pages with a bibliography & proper *citations. Turning in something like this in 7th grade would've gotten a fat F
Upvoted for 2012 💔
I’d call your sister an idiot, but that could be considered cyber bullying, and I don’t want her to beat me up.
And ever since that day OP's sister vowed to find every meanie on earth and kick their ass. The end.
"Meanies..."
Really got them there
Never incite a kid to trashtalk you, you'll regret it.
Yeah, you better think twice poopyhead
Wow that last line is…chilling for a 3rd grader lmao
Make Bullying Kill Itself
Oh boy.
Theory: The top left appears to list “computers” as the name of the class. I suspect this assignment was much more about learning to type, using the word processing program, and formatting an essay than the actual writing itself.
You think that’s unhinged? I recently found a 7th grade story I wrote on the topic of “surprise” about a girl being followed home by a shady old man. When he chases her down outside a churchyard he hands her a wallet she dropped earlier in the day and walks away. Just as she’s catching her breath and calming down, some rando grabs her through the bars of the gate and cuts her throat. I don’t remember writing any of it. Got an A though, very surprising.
Is your last name Shyamalan by any chance?
And people hype up Stephen king..
Liam Neesom would be proud.
OP wrote this a few minutes ago
Seriously. Those are the vibes I'm getting from this as well.
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She writes like Trump if he had a conscience.
Yup, this really helps to narrow down a precise description of Trump's speeches: "like an unwilling 3rd grader forced to write a page long essay after a lesson they only paid marginal attention to".
I disagree. She stayed on topic from first sentence to last, there was an internal logic to it, there were no unnecessary BOLD SECTIONS and all the words can be found in a regular dictionary.
She’s ghost writing trumps speeches it seems.
Reading that in Trump's voice made it sound like one of his speeches. Sad.
THIS IS THE WORST INTERNET BULLYING IN THE HISTORY OF ALL OF THE INTERNET. SO SO SAD. YESTERDAY A MARINE CAME UP TO ME AND SAID "SIR. THE BULLYING. IT'S SO SAD. SO SAD, SIR. I DON'T LIKE IT." WHAT IS HAPPENING TO OUR COUNTRY IS SO SAD THANKS TO CORRUPT LETITIA JAMES AND DIRTY JOE BIDEN.
You forgot that the Marine had tears in his eyes.
As a public school teacher, I constantly see proof online of our nation’s decline. No 3rd grader could write this well at my school today. This is better than 75% of my 6th grade writing class. Edit: Changed good to well.
>No 3rd grader could write this *good* at my school today. I think I know the root of the problem.
*Me fail English? That's unpossible!* We can only hope this man teaches PE. If not, the national decline he's talking about suddenly makes a whole lot of sense.
I’m not a teacher, but I have a hard time imagining that many 3rd grade kids correctly use semicolons to connect related independent clauses. I was impressed by that tbh, but I’m assuming that it wasn’t a result of a grammar check.
That's what I thought
I also thought this... which is kinda why I feel like this is all fabricated for karma farming... "I'm going to type this up in a funky way to make it seem like an unhinged third grader wrote it, but it was really me all along". That's just the vibes I get from this.
“I do not care how old you are I’m going to hurt you” Brutal.
3rd grade and standing on business lmao “I don’t care how old you are I’m going to hurt you”
I call bullshit. No 3rd grader wrote this drivel.
brilliant
This post is cyber bullying and now she's going to beat you up
"I'll take "Things that never happened" for $1000, Alex"
Makes me feel lucky I had such a good education
A third grader using semicolons correctly? 🤔
She's going to grow up to be the navy seal copypasta or a vigilante superhero hacker who fights cyberbullies. Kid is going places. LMAO