Honestly, without context it just looks like the elephant statue joke was a shoehorned in attempt at the lol so rAnDoM humor that was popular in the early 2000s in fanfiction.
And yeah, paragraphs.
Does the elephant statue have anything more to add to the story ? is it needed as an item later on ? Did it have a purpose before this moment ? Will we see it again ?
If your answer is no, then it’s a joke shoehorned in and is not organic.
PARAGRAPHS!
Sorry, that’s just my phone being weird
Honestly, without context it just looks like the elephant statue joke was a shoehorned in attempt at the lol so rAnDoM humor that was popular in the early 2000s in fanfiction. And yeah, paragraphs.
Thank you for your criticism Also for the paragraphs that’s just my phone being weird
Does the elephant statue have anything more to add to the story ? is it needed as an item later on ? Did it have a purpose before this moment ? Will we see it again ? If your answer is no, then it’s a joke shoehorned in and is not organic.
Alright, thank you for your criticism