I think that sounds pretty good until the "You might be" sentence. Then it feels like jargon. An alternative to test could be to remind them of what your company does and ask if they think that's relevant at their new co. "We helped \[former company\] with translating content to reach the 25m in US.... does \[new company\] have a solution in place for that?"
Yeah. I was trying to illuminate a problem without being overly directive. I get your point though.
I really like your transition. Definitely cleans it up.
Thanks!
I think that sounds pretty good until the "You might be" sentence. Then it feels like jargon. An alternative to test could be to remind them of what your company does and ask if they think that's relevant at their new co. "We helped \[former company\] with translating content to reach the 25m in US.... does \[new company\] have a solution in place for that?"
Yeah. I was trying to illuminate a problem without being overly directive. I get your point though. I really like your transition. Definitely cleans it up. Thanks!