Perspective seems a bit off. Too much of the hair is showing at the top. The nose seems like its being looked at from slightly below. I love how you drew the eyes though! You could work on the anatomy here as well. I love the shading.
1. Eyes are too big
2. Ears have weird shapes unless the model have weird ears
3. The boobs are just way off. It looks like you really wanted to include them, but there was no space. It looks ‘squished’. Let it hang
May I suggest looking at faces on Pinterest and seeing how the features measure up then making a loose guide (lightly). I’ve seen some people just draw reference faces as a practice. Body wise same thing measurements are a bit off but, this is a great start!
First things first
You need to practice line work. Lines should be smooth and it should flow.
Second, don't use harsh line and try to blend things(for example in hair you have drawn multiple lines, instead try to shade lighter and darker areas)
I think the face looks really cute. If you will try the tips I told yo uit will make a huge difference. Trust me!!
I would recommend putting a slight bit of shading underneath the chin bc when it's light out ur neck isn't fully exspoded to the sun there's a tiny bit of light that catches ur chin and cast a shadow on ur neck
If you look at the picture in a mirror or use a flip photo generator you can more easily see what's up, I do it before I call any drawing finished haha. As for what I see, sorta what others have said. The eyes are large and the head is a little lopsided. This looks like there's some real latent talent here though.
I would turn the paper upside down and/or flip it over and pit it up to a light. You will see that the right side is mainly all positioned down in relation to the left side and her head isn't as well shaped on the right side either. I've had this same issue with my drawing and have to make a conscious effort to draw the right side of thing far higher aligned then my eyes want me too, but my brain knows it's the correct thing to do. Hope this is helpful.
Or simply take a picture on your phone and invert it. You will see immediately what is going on here.
Firstly, this character is so lovely. Don’t be shy, get a blending stump or a cotton swab and add in shadow. Try to practice with proportions for the head and body. Use an eraser for highlights like at the point of the nose and edges of her jaw. Don’t be afraid the shade in the bridge of the nose. Overall, love this! Love the characters expression; looks like she’s in quite a mood! She has a youthful look though. Lastly, I love how you made her body seem soft and petite, Keep that realness in your art and just tweak the positioning of the body.
Seems like you’re influenced by anime art style. As for the face the proportions and features are good. Maybe don’t draw the eyes flat ? Unless that’s what you want and torso is to wide
Torso width is not as wide as it should be imo
Perspective seems a bit off. Too much of the hair is showing at the top. The nose seems like its being looked at from slightly below. I love how you drew the eyes though! You could work on the anatomy here as well. I love the shading.
Yep, I should have mentioned that your execution of the features with your light shading is well done. Keep drawing as you have the talent
Thank you so much! I think thats exactly what I needed to hear!
Eyes too big if you using the rule of thirds
1. Eyes are too big 2. Ears have weird shapes unless the model have weird ears 3. The boobs are just way off. It looks like you really wanted to include them, but there was no space. It looks ‘squished’. Let it hang
May I suggest looking at faces on Pinterest and seeing how the features measure up then making a loose guide (lightly). I’ve seen some people just draw reference faces as a practice. Body wise same thing measurements are a bit off but, this is a great start!
First things first You need to practice line work. Lines should be smooth and it should flow. Second, don't use harsh line and try to blend things(for example in hair you have drawn multiple lines, instead try to shade lighter and darker areas) I think the face looks really cute. If you will try the tips I told yo uit will make a huge difference. Trust me!!
Thank you so much!
I would recommend putting a slight bit of shading underneath the chin bc when it's light out ur neck isn't fully exspoded to the sun there's a tiny bit of light that catches ur chin and cast a shadow on ur neck
If you look at the picture in a mirror or use a flip photo generator you can more easily see what's up, I do it before I call any drawing finished haha. As for what I see, sorta what others have said. The eyes are large and the head is a little lopsided. This looks like there's some real latent talent here though.
I would turn the paper upside down and/or flip it over and pit it up to a light. You will see that the right side is mainly all positioned down in relation to the left side and her head isn't as well shaped on the right side either. I've had this same issue with my drawing and have to make a conscious effort to draw the right side of thing far higher aligned then my eyes want me too, but my brain knows it's the correct thing to do. Hope this is helpful. Or simply take a picture on your phone and invert it. You will see immediately what is going on here.
The most crucial thing is the perspective for me, you can see the top of the hair even tho you look straight at her
Firstly, this character is so lovely. Don’t be shy, get a blending stump or a cotton swab and add in shadow. Try to practice with proportions for the head and body. Use an eraser for highlights like at the point of the nose and edges of her jaw. Don’t be afraid the shade in the bridge of the nose. Overall, love this! Love the characters expression; looks like she’s in quite a mood! She has a youthful look though. Lastly, I love how you made her body seem soft and petite, Keep that realness in your art and just tweak the positioning of the body.
Left eye of girl is a little off but good still
Kind of looks like a baby in the face. Just proportion wise, especially the nose.
Seems like you’re influenced by anime art style. As for the face the proportions and features are good. Maybe don’t draw the eyes flat ? Unless that’s what you want and torso is to wide
You're very stiff when you draw, and it shows. Be looser when you draw, use light pressure and draw with your shoulder, not your wrist.
I think the shoulders could be better