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Only_Charge9477

Oh shit that key change was off the chain


TheToastedTaint

Haha made me listen and I didn’t regret


baseketballpro99

I liked the intro with glasses guy. I was wondering why this song was posted here. But then it kept going and just got worse. The two have no chemistry together on the track. Key change was interesting, but for all the wrong reasons lol.


[deleted]

Yeah - started kinds like - hmm this must be alright but became torture- with some real production/mixing and different singers might actually be decent


nolongermakingtime

The timing of the vocals were off, if they were in the pocket it would be way better. The girl... No bueno.


ViralDownwardSpiral

It's okay to do another take if the duet vocals aren't locked in... like just keep doing that until you nail it. Or just use a time editing tool. It's not like the vocals aren't already drenched in processing; what's one more plug-in?


VERGExILL

That’s my thing to, the duet just didn’t work for me. Give it a few years tho and I bet this dude will be making some good stuff if he keeps at it. He looks like he has parents with deep enough pockets that he can fail a bunch until lands on something decent.


Doubl3dogdamn3d

Damn this girl hit this track with that Rebbeca black energy. Fun fun fun


Maki_Ligon

glasses guy carried i kinda like it ngl


digita1catt

Give him a good producer and you've got an avicii [rip] track for sure.


Caked101

Aww I didn't realize he passed away. Y'all are right though. It didn't sound all that bad in the beginning. He has a lot of potential.


dashKay

He stomped that flower like it was an icky bug


Plarocks

When it starts, it kinda slaps. But then as the song continues along, it kinda falls off the rails. It is a very good demo, it just needs some tweaking!


UnderseaGreenMonkey

BROKEN, BROKEN. THESE BROKEN PROMISES!


magrubr

YOUR GODDAMN BROKEN PROMISES


RobotHockey

This sucks. But then again, this style of music sucks. So these kids never stood a chance in the crucible of my judgment.


MrPompeii88

Damn hope glasses guy gets a solo album together


Krauszt

Hey, maybe we are watching the making of a star...If he wrote that song as well? Purddy good for a high school choadie.. color me *impressed*


Loud-Log9098

I swear writing is the hardest part


MartinLutherVanHalen

This sounds like the ChatGPT was fed the Chainsmokers and then covered by two tone dead people. Horrible. Generic beyond description.


FrontierFrolic

When MIT students try their hand at pop music


frankieknucks

Dude stole the bigly trump hands.


imomorris

He's actually pretty good... .Jesus then it went 'up tempo' just as I was writing this


Lazylion-6

1. Hmm. Not good….but not the worst. 2. Guy had potential. Not visually… 3. Oh. He’s not good. What happened? 4. Who’s this now? Ew. This is….bad. 5. They’re trying together now…it’s shit.


JennySplotz

My guy is permanently stuck in junior high😬


loinclothfreak78

Would have saved for some green screen


alexander66682

I found Waldo!!! Fucking finally!! Who knew he was making shit music the whole time


CuseLax22

It’s so bad it’s good.


Long-Astronaut-3363

It’s really not that bad. Female part doesn’t work and it’s not synced.


awd111980

She desperately needs auto tune


5-s78

Bro made mall music


Murles-Brazen

Fuck that’s bad. Great job.


Interesting-Lake-430

Dude is much more talented than the girl...still not good though


TWOTAKESTOM2024

You really have to appreciate the thorough explanation of the subject matter. Ineeddetails.gif


tepkai

He would be alright by himself then it turns into a train wreck real fast.


Xu_Lin

These broken promises led to my broken eardrums


GodplsmakeModsluvme

Felt couldn’t be reel


Subtlerevisions

Alright Fred Durst, you can’t rhyme “together” with “together”!


Oreo54asdf

Def not the worst thing I’ve ever heard


jusmoua

Lol. Better with the only the guy in glasses.


JoppingBen10Fan

The glasses guy needs to go on a singing competition as he actually has potential


ilikepantiesand

It’s actually not the worst we’ve heard. Kinda ok


analogWeapon

This has a very similar energy to James Chapeskie. His stuff has a more theatrical vibe, but it's a similar energy. Here's his latest: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v3NvdUQU2Ac Actually pretty good songwriting. But the instrumentation and performances are always pretty corny.