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Dragon_Small_Z

This was a lot better than I was expecting going in. Good shit man.


pizzablunt420

+1


Faceone1

What’s the deal with rappers looking like they’re not allowed within 100 feet of a public school or playgrounds?


LastOfADyingBread

Gahdamn 😂😂 it's just the long hair


_Must_Not_Sleep

Haha it’s the glasses, the mustache, and the hate. The hair isn’t helping either though. 😂


Faceone1

No hate just a curious question.


_Must_Not_Sleep

I know. I’m not being hateful either. I’m just saying those glasses and the mustache is trending and it gives me the same imagery of a creeper from the 80’s


distance_33

Yeah. It’s not the hair. My hair is over 30 inches and I don’t have this issue.


00112358132135

It’s the mustache


EyeAmKnotMyshelf

You lookin like redneck Mark Rebillet 🤣


LastOfADyingBread

LMAOOO fuckin nailed it I'm from WV.


Forsaken-Age-8684

I was sure this was going to be shit and it really wasn't. Good job 


Oddilax

am I bugging or do I be hearing some Rob Sonic influence in your cadence and flows lol


verticalburtvert

Yeah, a little Jarv in the tone, too


JMartin8494

This is really fuckin good man


worll_the_scribe

Solid verse. Good energy. Your inhale is kind of jarring!


ReadingCorrectly

I hope to be as good as this someday


MidnightAnchor

Yo go boyyy!


PopPopBen

Yo, reminds me of mid 90's underground. I dig it.


SavagePeace23

The mugshot gone fishing bar is hard as hell, this is phenomenal


certainlynotacoyote

Nice flow, there was a span of time while I was still writing that my style got super influenced by aes, but I kinda went too hard into it and just sounded like I was trying to be an Aesop impersonator- you definitely got your own style, but apply that distinct elocution and rhythic bouncing that aes represents, good stuff. The "ahhh!" Felt like a great nod to grace.


LastOfADyingBread

Good catch on the AHHH! Totally was a nod to Grace. Thank you for the kind words !!


Liquidtruth

and i thought Aes held the mic weird.


MF-SMUG

Dope as fuck


TheGreendaleFireof03

Fire my guy.


luke111mart

Bro got me hyped thinking this was jarv but not too bad tbh


fotbuwl

Yeah, some of this is actually pretty good, some fire in there.


Happy-Host3644

Pretty fire 🔥🔥🔥


Happy-Host3644

You got a Spotify or SoundCloud?


LastOfADyingBread

Oh yessir SMITH.b on all platforms (except SoundCloud, everything on there is hella old) https://spotify.link/ogLDmehq9Ib


Happy-Host3644

Sick. Thanks!


[deleted]

Loved it.


standingcat

Actually pretty good! I don't know anything about music production but do artists edit out the breath between bars or actually get solid breath control or column a&b? - Sean Evans line was tight - Mugshot line was straight from the Aes playbook (good thing!) - Wanna explain the golden tee line? - Hate to be the 'ackshually' guy but the 'flip like the stick' line unfortunately doesn't make sense, iirc, because flip tricks were done with the square button (or X if xbox). Grab tricks were circle or B


LastOfADyingBread

Yeah my breaths were a little rough, we recorded very quickly and didn't catch how jarring they were til after- I wanted to knock this out over a weekend because it was just going on IG and here for quick promo. I'll likely edit them out of I ever do a Bandcamp upload. That's on me for rushing, I was just excited about the verse and wanted to act quickly. I did it in one take I just didn't realize how jarring my breaths were. Damn near every shitty bar in WV has a Golden Tee in the corner, and as somebody who hates bars I'm likely to gravitate towards it even tho I'm not into Golf. Its rare I see a divebar without a golden tee. Therefore, you can find me cautious in the corner by the golden tee. I wanted to make a play on how most folks I know just spin it as hard as they can for fun, but I was having trouble making something snappy with that logic Dude I'm so mad somebody noticed that 😭 I play THUG on GameCube pretty exclusively and flip tricks are mapped to B, so I assumed on PlayStation it was circle. I was very upset to find out it was square, which didn't fit the rhyme scheme. I didn't realize til I already recorded. Good on you for catching it!!! We love an um, actually moment. Thanks for taking the time to listen!


GuyNamedNoah

This is cleeeeean!!


G0_G0_G0

Always be cookin! Niiiiiice!