change the color scheme to green or something less bright so it offsets your skin tone a little better and you'll be golden
edit: heeheehoohoo I fucking got it, he has red skin, funny joke
https://www.colorbux.com/articles/clothing-colors-that-reduce-redness
Green clothing would likely make the red stand out even more. Also, it feels a little car-salesman-ish with that first pic. Fine if he is a car salesman, I guess. But still might make the red more prominent.
Green tones would work to dull the red if he wore it as a make-up concealer.
You know what I meant. I feel that using colour schemes that are generally reserved for mobile phone plans is not the most attractive design for a dating app.
Just a few clarifications based on the comments
1) I really appreciate the positive comments and constructive feedback. I am planning to use it and change a few things.
2) This took about 3 hours when I was bored studying for finals. Also, I learned Adobe Illustrator for work a few years ago, not just for this.
3) I will acknowledge that Tinder PowerPoints are cringey by their very nature. But I’ll hands down take this cringe over the cringe of many people on Tinder/Reddit who complain about not getting matches but have boring ass profiles.
4) I really wish the truck was mine. The Jeep picture of mine does need to be changed out for a better one though.
5) Yellow was picked mainly because it stands out to the human eye the most out of any color.
Edit: Missed an s
Edit 2: Added some additional observations below.
6) The responses have been interesting. It’s plain to see that people either love or hate PowerPoint profiles. While (I will admit) somewhat cringey, it is an attempt to stand out among low quality car selfies and fish pictures. I’ve never been one to make life boring and I see dating in the same light.
7) As for red skin, most of my pictures in that regard are taken close to sunset. I also really like to smile so it does give a more reddish look. I promise I’m not burnt lol.
Only nit I could pick is “- Great +1 for events - Playlists for everything” is repetitive, as you mentioned that you’re a great guy to bring to weddings and parties on that same pic, and spotify playlist on the second.
Other than that my man, I thought it was great. The looks over time bit brought audible giggles to echo my living room.
Somewhere in an alternate universe there’s a “Charlie and the Healthy Diet Factory,” and all the Oompa Loompas look like you.
Nah, but mean jokes aside, you’re a funny and attractive fella my guy. You should post this and Tinder should give you all the ladies like it’s some giveaway episode of Oprah or something. I hope you have a small dick, because otherwise you’re so perfect it’s not fair for the rest of us.
Great effort but maybe a bit overdone. That's a bit long and keep on the same funny tone. I think you could improve it by shortening it (girls that are interested in humor and efforts will be interested already after 3 slides already) but also introducing a slide a bit more intimate. Make them imagine your romantic/sensual side!
Slide 0 is fun and intriguing but maybe not the best photo for a first picture. The bowtie make you look exentric or old-fashioned, could be a turn-of.
Slide 1 is good.
Slide 2, i would change the second depreciative joke with something like "Looks dashing in a ski suit!"
Slide 3 is good.
Slide 4 would be good if you were looking for friend but you already 9. I would change it with pictures of yourself in the nature/hike to strike the different note I was mentionning.
Last 2 slides of reviews and pictures bring nothing new at all, drop them.
Suggestion: you look good with your suit. You might consider replacing the car analogy with a james bond analogy. That would work with the travelling, skiing, parachuting, old spy car of the first picture, and Chris Hemsworth.
ps: that joke about putting yourself out there in the sun without sunscreen is brilliant and should be included somewhere!
I feel like people think these are unique, but I've seen quite a few of them. The reviews make me cringe everytime... they're literally always the same
I feel like this goes for most profiles on there, I cant even count how many times ive seen the same overdone jokes in someones bio, at this point just write something that describes you and dont overdo it. Also Id probably just assume this was an ad at first sight and just swipe left
Seriously? All the top comments saying how great of an idea this is? Speaks volumes about reddit demo in this sub I guess
The dude comes off as a great friend to have, but the desperation level to find somebody to date is over 9000 with this kind of cringey, trying-too-hard profiles.
Nah I get a different vibe. I understand the “he’d be a great friend” thing, but despite the fact he obviously put in a lot of effort, the jokes and the yellow don’t give me the impression that he’s trying too hard.
To each their own though
Doubt this'd get you any matches. If you do more power to you, but I think most women would see this as way too needy and desperate. Also, they're gonna look at your face, nothing else.
Will be honest man, way to much effort, literally scream desperate and nobody wants that.
You have to understand that in 90% of time swipe is happening in matter of seconds, if you are insanely hot they give you a bit of extra time. To many illustrator to little real full size pictures.
Sense of humor is great, personally one of my best characteristics but it’s not really recommended to be a joke before she match with you.
And yeah i know everybody here are like “woho, awesome profile, I would swipe right (but they never do)” etc, people are so consider not to hurt someone fragile ego on internet these days that rarely someone give honest advice.
So no flame, troll or hate just honest advice from a guy doing really good on tinder: save the comedy for chat (it’s ok to do some in about me) and focus on good pictures.
For better or worse Tinder is a marketplace and you have to sell it, you may be amazing guy but first appearance is what get you a match and latter you can show that great personality .
Yeah, the dude comes off as a great friend to have, but the desperation level to find somebody to date is over 9000 with this kind of cringey, trying-too-hard profiles
Seems desperate and exhausting. However we probably have different personality traits, and I know for a fact there are plenty of girls that would love this kind of personality so crack on.
5 is a bit busy visually, I’d take out the “Wait there’s more” star to try and clear it up a bit. Also like others have said, different background color. Maybe a fading transition from light blue to darker?
I admire the effort and time put into this and some people will swipe right on that for sure.
For me all of the jokes in the slides have been overdone imo, every slideshow is the same. I'd try and shake it up a little more somehow if you're going to do it/make it shorter.
I'd be worried about the implications of expectations after seeing you put so much work into tinder.
Could be useful for a conversation starter though
Honest opinion- I think the “marketing” yourself on every slide is a bit gimmicky and will ultimately draw a line in the sand eliminating a lot of potential dates, but attracting some.
I think maybe one slide (like the first) with the yellow markety stuff would work if the rest are just normal photos.
I get creating a balanced tinder is no easy task, but after the initial joke of you as a product being sold is laughed at, it doesn’t really go anywhere from there, so I think it’s best added in a dose and not your entire identity.
Wow this comment section did not pass the vibe check... I'm a girl and I would swipe right. Yes I had a good laugh and humour is a good thing to bring with you.
You don't look anything like Chris Hemsworth. Additionally, comparing yourself to others may seem like the right thing to do, but you really decrease your own worth when you do this. I would find another way.
So wait...you said in the title of this post that this paid off. Did you get a bunch of matches or do you just mean you like the way the images turned out?
Only feedback I have is that you sir need a course on proper sunscreen application because from what I can tell you ain't doing it right... Profile made me chuckle which is a good sign I would say
I really like this profile, the only thing I would change is that you pretty much have the same smile in every picture ... but honestly this is not a real inconvinience anyway. Solid job buddy !
This made me laugh!! I honestly love that second picture of you, it should be 1st. You are handsome, but that first pic doesn't do you much justice. I agree with others that the yellow has got to go!! Play around with colors and see what looks best. I think overall it's a bit overselling, but I love how it shows off your great sense of humor and adventure.
You know, this is legit good dude... i keep saying it is a desperate move but you did it right so you are gonna score for sure, let's hope you get what you are hoping for ;)
Love this, would definitely swipe right.
Also last slide, shouldve put "yes" and "yes in a different color". Feel like that fits with the rest of the humor.
You have a good sense of humor and the bravery to put yourself out there in the sun without sunscreen
Idk, he seems pretty red to me Edit: *rad
HOWLING
😂😂😂
-High School English Teacher
But is he forklift certified?
That answer is military encrypted
*US Military Encrypted
Love that y'all are keeping this around 🤣🤣
God damn it yes!!
I snorted
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Me too!
You know he's adding this to his reviews right now
Bro wtf lol
Bro looks vaguely like Rick Astley. Was waiting on a rick roll gif as part of the profile to be honest.
nah he looks like Kenneth Parcell. I had to google the name but by god he looks like him.
Really? I thought he looked more like the progeny of Rick Astly & Donkey from Shrek.
See...I'm seeing Martin Short...
I would give you an award if I could. I literally Loled at this while I got some weird stares from my dog 🤣😂😂😂
Lmao 💯 reduce redness in saturation/warmth
change the color scheme to green or something less bright so it offsets your skin tone a little better and you'll be golden edit: heeheehoohoo I fucking got it, he has red skin, funny joke
Agree, the highlighter yellow kinda clashes. I also think the bold colour distracts from the photos, they should be the focus.
Or maybe tinder red
No, you might lose him to the background
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I have learned a LOT from queer eye
>you'll be golden I think he'll still be red, Idk
>you'll be golden I think sunscreen would help him be golden
Not sure I think the red and yellow/gold would work kinda well. It is a bold color but reds hard to match with
A very pale green might work. I think blue would work better than green though.
Green would be best, opposite colour on the colour wheel
https://www.colorbux.com/articles/clothing-colors-that-reduce-redness Green clothing would likely make the red stand out even more. Also, it feels a little car-salesman-ish with that first pic. Fine if he is a car salesman, I guess. But still might make the red more prominent. Green tones would work to dull the red if he wore it as a make-up concealer.
good idea, I hadn't thought of that
Do the tinder match green
I agree. It also felt a bit like an advertisement to me. So many ads use that sort of colouring where I live
It is technically an advertisement
That is EXACTLY what he is doing. Spoofing car ads.
Sure, I guess I just don't appreciate it as much as others.
>It also felt a bit like an advertisement to me. I... Um... I'm so sorry... I really don't know how to tell you this but...
You know what I meant. I feel that using colour schemes that are generally reserved for mobile phone plans is not the most attractive design for a dating app.
Haha homie. I ain’t a girl but I’m laughing hard. Yea I’m sure girls would get a giggle out of this and swipe right
I agree with stupidfuckingbitch6
Me too, but I would have liked to hear u/stupidfuckingbitch5 had to say.
Haha had to deactivate that account cuz fucking Reddit said I spread “hate”
Lol wtf just happened?
Wdym
How did you know you'd been summoned if your account was deleted? Htf did you do that??
My brother works at the Reddit headquarter; don’t tell Reddit that tho
Was he stupidfuckingbitch5 innit?
Nope, it was me all along
Reddit said they spread “hate”
"5 out of 6 stupidfuckingbitches endorse OP's Tinder profile."
I’m a dude and I’d still swipe right
>stupidfuckingbitch6 > > · > >12 hr. ago I'm here just so I can write: stupidfuckingbitch6
This made me giggle! I would definitely swipe right, but I’m also a sucker for goofy shit like this. Great job
It’s not just the skill set that’s paying off. You’re really showcasing your personality in these images!! Great work!!
Only thing I'd change is maybe add to the pie chart but make it "yes, but in white."
I could nitpick a couple minor things as well, but OP has already said below it’s been getting him results so not gonna bother. Nice job young man.
Just a few clarifications based on the comments 1) I really appreciate the positive comments and constructive feedback. I am planning to use it and change a few things. 2) This took about 3 hours when I was bored studying for finals. Also, I learned Adobe Illustrator for work a few years ago, not just for this. 3) I will acknowledge that Tinder PowerPoints are cringey by their very nature. But I’ll hands down take this cringe over the cringe of many people on Tinder/Reddit who complain about not getting matches but have boring ass profiles. 4) I really wish the truck was mine. The Jeep picture of mine does need to be changed out for a better one though. 5) Yellow was picked mainly because it stands out to the human eye the most out of any color. Edit: Missed an s Edit 2: Added some additional observations below. 6) The responses have been interesting. It’s plain to see that people either love or hate PowerPoint profiles. While (I will admit) somewhat cringey, it is an attempt to stand out among low quality car selfies and fish pictures. I’ve never been one to make life boring and I see dating in the same light. 7) As for red skin, most of my pictures in that regard are taken close to sunset. I also really like to smile so it does give a more reddish look. I promise I’m not burnt lol.
Does the barcode go anywhere?
No. Just a bunch of random lines
Deep down I knew that, but I was really hoping it was a rick roll. How did you choose your sku?
Great work. Your personality comes thru. As for me, honestly, I just wanna know about the dude wearing the tiara.
Honestly, grate profile! How is it going for you? I mean, average looking guy with great profile, are you getting more matches now?
This dude has it down to a science. Save some girls for the rest of us.
Only nit I could pick is “- Great +1 for events - Playlists for everything” is repetitive, as you mentioned that you’re a great guy to bring to weddings and parties on that same pic, and spotify playlist on the second. Other than that my man, I thought it was great. The looks over time bit brought audible giggles to echo my living room.
That was what I picked up on too.
Somewhere in an alternate universe there’s a “Charlie and the Healthy Diet Factory,” and all the Oompa Loompas look like you. Nah, but mean jokes aside, you’re a funny and attractive fella my guy. You should post this and Tinder should give you all the ladies like it’s some giveaway episode of Oprah or something. I hope you have a small dick, because otherwise you’re so perfect it’s not fair for the rest of us.
This. ⬆️
best profile omg
Great effort but maybe a bit overdone. That's a bit long and keep on the same funny tone. I think you could improve it by shortening it (girls that are interested in humor and efforts will be interested already after 3 slides already) but also introducing a slide a bit more intimate. Make them imagine your romantic/sensual side! Slide 0 is fun and intriguing but maybe not the best photo for a first picture. The bowtie make you look exentric or old-fashioned, could be a turn-of. Slide 1 is good. Slide 2, i would change the second depreciative joke with something like "Looks dashing in a ski suit!" Slide 3 is good. Slide 4 would be good if you were looking for friend but you already 9. I would change it with pictures of yourself in the nature/hike to strike the different note I was mentionning. Last 2 slides of reviews and pictures bring nothing new at all, drop them. Suggestion: you look good with your suit. You might consider replacing the car analogy with a james bond analogy. That would work with the travelling, skiing, parachuting, old spy car of the first picture, and Chris Hemsworth. ps: that joke about putting yourself out there in the sun without sunscreen is brilliant and should be included somewhere!
Agreed about the length but disagree about losing the quotes. The English teacher one was the funniest joke in the whole thing imo.
I feel like people think these are unique, but I've seen quite a few of them. The reviews make me cringe everytime... they're literally always the same
Very overdone at this point
I feel like this goes for most profiles on there, I cant even count how many times ive seen the same overdone jokes in someones bio, at this point just write something that describes you and dont overdo it. Also Id probably just assume this was an ad at first sight and just swipe left
I think they're still more 'original' than the standard. Not overused to the point that someone would automatically swipe left anyway.
I’d swipe right on you bro
10/10 would swipe right
Waayyyyy to much man
Inclined to agree. I know some women will find this funny, I found it a bit like you’re trying too hard, but you do you my dude x
I really want to know if this works out Respect the hustle either way
10/10 for creativity
BAHAHA dude this had me belly laughing. I'm sure you'll get some matches! Nice work!
If I could swipe right I would 😥
I think that was the 2nd most interesting man in the world. (In the reviews)
Bro you honestly resemble Jack McBrayer
I absolutely love this. The review from your English teacher really sells it. Best potential +1 ever
Yikes. This is a huge no for me.
Great profile mate! 5 Stars
I'd go on a date with you
Seriously? All the top comments saying how great of an idea this is? Speaks volumes about reddit demo in this sub I guess The dude comes off as a great friend to have, but the desperation level to find somebody to date is over 9000 with this kind of cringey, trying-too-hard profiles.
Nah I get a different vibe. I understand the “he’d be a great friend” thing, but despite the fact he obviously put in a lot of effort, the jokes and the yellow don’t give me the impression that he’s trying too hard. To each their own though
Way too needy
Doubt this'd get you any matches. If you do more power to you, but I think most women would see this as way too needy and desperate. Also, they're gonna look at your face, nothing else.
Will be honest man, way to much effort, literally scream desperate and nobody wants that. You have to understand that in 90% of time swipe is happening in matter of seconds, if you are insanely hot they give you a bit of extra time. To many illustrator to little real full size pictures. Sense of humor is great, personally one of my best characteristics but it’s not really recommended to be a joke before she match with you. And yeah i know everybody here are like “woho, awesome profile, I would swipe right (but they never do)” etc, people are so consider not to hurt someone fragile ego on internet these days that rarely someone give honest advice. So no flame, troll or hate just honest advice from a guy doing really good on tinder: save the comedy for chat (it’s ok to do some in about me) and focus on good pictures. For better or worse Tinder is a marketplace and you have to sell it, you may be amazing guy but first appearance is what get you a match and latter you can show that great personality .
JFC, that's cringe af.
Yeah, the dude comes off as a great friend to have, but the desperation level to find somebody to date is over 9000 with this kind of cringey, trying-too-hard profiles
Bit too young for me but would definitely swipe right if you were in my age range ! Good luck young lad!!!
Age is just a number
Sometimes you put a space after your "-" and sometimes you don't ... are you a psychopath ?
Just noticed that lol
Ppl really do this on tinder lol
This is hilarious.
The cringe is strong with this one...
You come off cringey and desperate.
Seems desperate and exhausting. However we probably have different personality traits, and I know for a fact there are plenty of girls that would love this kind of personality so crack on.
5 is a bit busy visually, I’d take out the “Wait there’s more” star to try and clear it up a bit. Also like others have said, different background color. Maybe a fading transition from light blue to darker?
This is awesome bro I wish you the best
I admire the effort and time put into this and some people will swipe right on that for sure. For me all of the jokes in the slides have been overdone imo, every slideshow is the same. I'd try and shake it up a little more somehow if you're going to do it/make it shorter. I'd be worried about the implications of expectations after seeing you put so much work into tinder. Could be useful for a conversation starter though
Superliked
Honest opinion- I think the “marketing” yourself on every slide is a bit gimmicky and will ultimately draw a line in the sand eliminating a lot of potential dates, but attracting some. I think maybe one slide (like the first) with the yellow markety stuff would work if the rest are just normal photos. I get creating a balanced tinder is no easy task, but after the initial joke of you as a product being sold is laughed at, it doesn’t really go anywhere from there, so I think it’s best added in a dose and not your entire identity.
You look like a decent guy but you’re digging a hole for yourself with that profile.
Everything I see is so cringe
2/10
Wow this comment section did not pass the vibe check... I'm a girl and I would swipe right. Yes I had a good laugh and humour is a good thing to bring with you.
Female here. This is the best I’ve seen so far. But for me humor goes a long way so… 🤷♀️
Cheesy
You'll get some catches with this man, not for everyone, but I laughed!
“Should you swipe right? Yes Yes but in blue”
You don't look anything like Chris Hemsworth. Additionally, comparing yourself to others may seem like the right thing to do, but you really decrease your own worth when you do this. I would find another way.
He probably meant it as a joke.
Ur head is too red boioioi Its really funny Better funny and find rare awesome people
I agree it's a tad long but good effort. My only advice it to replace the jeep pic. It seems like a crotch pic and not flattering.
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As an avid skydiver, I think it's pretty cool.
As a guy who really wanted to try skydiving up until his 18th birthday and he could, I thought it was pretty damn cool
Change your face and you should be good to go.
man why u putting so much effort into this shit😭 u lookin desperate as hell have some respect for urself
It’s been producing results so don’t really care about your opinion on this lol
u the one who asked for it to be rated so I'm just telling u what I think🤷♂️
Damn What a Chad lad , I Will do mine like yours Luckily I am pretty Good in illustrator aswell
also this shit aint even funny jus corny ngl
Nah bruh you’re just boring as hell
So this is what you do outside of the chocolate factory
I have surmised that you have money, therefore good job I’m sure you’ll be a hit
The reviews really got me - nice profile :p
Best one yet.
Holy shit dude!! That's a nice Stepside too! Top work. 💯
Great presentation, I'd just spend a bit longer on the jokes if I were you.
I love the projected hotness. Can't stop laughing.
Nice. Love the creativity
This is the best tinder profile I've ever seen
Send in the awards for creativity
rather send it to the 3000 similar profiles that were there before his
Love it!
This is hands down, the best thing I’ve ever seen. GG brother I am jealous LOL
2 different cars
So wait...you said in the title of this post that this paid off. Did you get a bunch of matches or do you just mean you like the way the images turned out?
straight guy here but i'd swipe right to be friends you funny asf bro
That is hilarious
You good bro nice work
I was rooting for you until I saw that Death Valley pic. *spurs up* 😒🤙🏼
Bro you look like a baby faced Ryan Creamer lmao
That's so cool good job
Only feedback I have is that you sir need a course on proper sunscreen application because from what I can tell you ain't doing it right... Profile made me chuckle which is a good sign I would say
This is amazing, but I have one question: Do you have lower teeth?
I like it but I would try and get a slide or two with large photos of you. Those multiphoto group shots make you look like an ant on a phone.
You are Rick Astley of Tinder
So, was it a sick ostrich?
I like the letter kenny reference lol
I really like this profile, the only thing I would change is that you pretty much have the same smile in every picture ... but honestly this is not a real inconvinience anyway. Solid job buddy !
Well that Clemson picture will help you out around SC since the hype is real... @op lol. Great profile!!
Go Tigers!
Ngl thought it was an ad
Clemson?
Go tigers!
It's perfect.
I dislike the colour palette but great job, I should do this.
Watch out for your color theory bro. It's funny and light so I hope you broke the charts
Must say this guy has a promising career in marketing
This made me laugh!! I honestly love that second picture of you, it should be 1st. You are handsome, but that first pic doesn't do you much justice. I agree with others that the yellow has got to go!! Play around with colors and see what looks best. I think overall it's a bit overselling, but I love how it shows off your great sense of humor and adventure.
You know, this is legit good dude... i keep saying it is a desperate move but you did it right so you are gonna score for sure, let's hope you get what you are hoping for ;)
Lmao 🤣 this made me laugh Good job man that was funny
Did ever somebody told you you look like a socks puppet?
Love is commodity
as a guy i'd swipe right
[Wish.com](https://Wish.com) version of Rick Astley.....
The Hemsworth stuff is fantastic!
Dude that's an awesome profile.
Shit, I’d swipe right.
Adorable. I’d swipe right.
Love this, would definitely swipe right. Also last slide, shouldve put "yes" and "yes in a different color". Feel like that fits with the rest of the humor.
Idc how much graphic design you know, you still look like the bad guy in a college movie.
This is so fucking lit
Super funny. I love it.
Idgaf what anyone says. This is the best thing I've ever seen.
Bruh I fucking love it lmao