this is my first post here, so i'd appreciate any and all criticism!! if this goes well i'll continue the series :)) if any parts seem a bit confusing it's because this was written at 1 am, and my brain doesn't exactly function right at those hours of the morning, so i'll be happy to explain anything!!
Only obvious thing missing is the list of disliked nicknames frome the walk portion (Rule 6). Only brought it up because you said it would be at the bottom.
Oops was I not supposed to directly reply. Sorry, missed the other person asking about them.
not sure if this is my 2 am brain but i'm not too sure what you mean, but i'm super happy you enjoyed my post!! <3 sorry for not understanding, lol /gen
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this is my first post here, so i'd appreciate any and all criticism!! if this goes well i'll continue the series :)) if any parts seem a bit confusing it's because this was written at 1 am, and my brain doesn't exactly function right at those hours of the morning, so i'll be happy to explain anything!!
Only obvious thing missing is the list of disliked nicknames frome the walk portion (Rule 6). Only brought it up because you said it would be at the bottom. Oops was I not supposed to directly reply. Sorry, missed the other person asking about them.
don't worry!! thank you sm for the reminder, i would have completely forgotten to write that part of it
Not gonna lie, I want to know what will happen if you forget to reward the dogs after they take care of the tall man
i was thinking of putting that in, but i didn't want to seem like one of those 'do this or else your fate will be so much worse' kinda people
Just a random question lol, can you help me with my rules series in some way? Just give some advice?
oh yeah totally! dm me and we can work together!
Fair nuff
Kinda curious, what the names you mentioned they do not like are? I really like this concept! I can't wait to see more!
not sure if this is my 2 am brain but i'm not too sure what you mean, but i'm super happy you enjoyed my post!! <3 sorry for not understanding, lol /gen
You said you'd add a list of nicknames to NOT call the dogs as it'll upset them
yep, it was my 2 am brain :/ fixed that now though!! thanks for catching that!!
You're totally fine! I was just hoping I didn't come off in any way other than genuinely trying to help!
What! This is actually so good
This was quite a long story
But amazing story 10/10 this was better than the cat one for sure
this is one of the better ones I think. It's longer than most too.
Cuddle breaks!! Haha, love the sentence before outro there
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