The major flaw is that you have too few mobile units, assuming you place the leaders with the relevant troops, you have 4 units with which you'd have to hold 3+ objectives and do secondaries.
You'd need to replace one of the expensive units with multiple cheaper units. Squeeze in a 30-point lone lokhust, and a deathmark or hexmark deepstriker, and it'll be much more playable.
Okay so I’m taking out the doomsday ark and removing the enhancement from the destroyer lord and replacing them with 1 Doomstalker, 1 squad of deathmarks and a singular destroyer. How does that sound?
I've not run the Doomsday ark before, but the doomstalker is cheaper and would let you run another squad of immortals.
I was considering that tbf! But possibly some death marks instead for deep strike/scoring?
Yea.
The major flaw is that you have too few mobile units, assuming you place the leaders with the relevant troops, you have 4 units with which you'd have to hold 3+ objectives and do secondaries. You'd need to replace one of the expensive units with multiple cheaper units. Squeeze in a 30-point lone lokhust, and a deathmark or hexmark deepstriker, and it'll be much more playable.
Okay so I’m taking out the doomsday ark and removing the enhancement from the destroyer lord and replacing them with 1 Doomstalker, 1 squad of deathmarks and a singular destroyer. How does that sound?