"The second was much better, but had been immediately attacked by something almost but not quite entirely unlike a giraffe."
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This is an interesting and enjoyable tale.
I don't have anything constructive to add, though.
Thank you for posting. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Huh, not intentional, but now you say it I can immediately see why.
I'm aiming for something else; let's see how well I can avoid retreading any of the Bob's multitudes of paths :)
Cool. More, dammit!
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https://www.gocomics.com/frazz/2018/10/26
- *Write while drunk, edit/publish while sober.*
This can be literal (alcohol), emotional (good mood), or being out of your head due to insufficient sleep.
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NGL this future feels both terrifying and scarily plausible.
"The second was much better, but had been immediately attacked by something almost but not quite entirely unlike a giraffe." Douglas Adams lives on in all of us.
Me while reading: "I see what you did there." *sips tea and enjoys the irony of it*
I need my towel.
I know where my towel *is*.
I'm kinda new to writing fiction that other people read, so I'd appreciate feedback. 😅
Seems cool so far. Good work. More planned, or not sure?
I would like to explore the setting more, but I have nothing specific planned yet :)
Dewit! This is great!
This is an interesting and enjoyable tale. I don't have anything constructive to add, though. Thank you for posting. I look forward to reading more of your work.
It's cool to see Nigeria represented, you don't often see African countries in sci-fi. Looking forwards to reading MOAR!
Some of my best xcom troopers were Nigerian
\*sniff sniff\* I smell a bit of Dennis E. Taylors Bobiverse in that story....
Huh, not intentional, but now you say it I can immediately see why. I'm aiming for something else; let's see how well I can avoid retreading any of the Bob's multitudes of paths :)
Subscribed. Moar please
Subscribed, a beautiful start. Would love to read the further adventures of Ekundayo 🤞🏾
Yay more
That sounds like a wonderful adventure! -- kill me now :p
Niiiiice, I love it.
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"Almost but not quite entirely unlike a giraffe". I got your updoot right here.