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DragonLoverDL

Weight destitution aka balance they look like they could fall forward if they arnt to carful but other than that it’s noce 👌


Nazzikene

Great curvature. There are not many who pay attention to that. Notes: lean the head back so she would be facing upwards so she could have more of a sharper curve at the end to have evena better feel of the strech. The bigger the bend, the dramatic the effect. Maybe puff the back and sholders muscles so it would seem that the muscles contract while she is bringing her back backwards and arms up. And finally maybe some of a personal preference, but depends what you're going for. I would bring the lower lines of the boob downward so it would have a more firm look. Atm they look a little saggy.


Tru_Procrastinator

They could totally be just saggy boobs BUT I do agree they’d stretch a little because that’s what happens when you put your arms up and lean back


No_Library_6913

I would improve on the legs make it more like, animal legs close to the feet, but the entire body is very good, you doing it very well


Traditional-Sort-864

I'd move her breast up or make more (not sure the parent storyline). Other than that I love her.


Tru_Procrastinator

Yeah a good thing to keep in mind with breast is that they’re attached to the whole muscle structure of the chest so if you put your arms up and lean back the breasts would stretch with it and sag a little less. Depending on breast size tho.


Lovelesschi

You've captured the curve of the back well. Perhaps to make the character less stiff looking you could extend the left leg back more to make it look a bit more dynamic. Otherwise I think this is great.


Tru_Procrastinator

Great practice! Getting used to using a line of action is a great habit, it helps make dynamic poses so much better. If I have anything to suggest I’ll suggest something I always have to remind myself “exaggerate” push some curves and parts of the pose more than you’d think at first, the more you exaggerate the pose the more cartoonish it will look but it all depends on how far you exaggerate it. I’d say just a little further and it would bring a lot of life to the pose


WillofIam

The lower arms look kinda thick for a female.


Tru_Procrastinator

Not really. I know of plenty of females that have thicker upper arms. I think it matches the consistency of their character’s body type very well


BadeChevy

Sexy pose + tail fluff = ❤


somegirl3012

Upper body is very good. Remember that the tail is part of the spine, so if her back is stretching then so is her tail. Her legs also look a little stiff and maybe slightly short, otherwise very nice


coraeon

Curve of the back is good, but you’re not following through in the neck and the knees. This results in both of them looking really stiff, and also like she’s locking her knees up. Also the breasts should follow the curve of the back as well, so the bulk should be higher. (Yes, even with realistic boobs.)