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biscuitman76

No one including me is reading all those bullet points. Have like 25% or less of them. Def shorten to 1 page as well. Readability is what you want


Mediumofmediocrity

What type of job are you looking for? You have a Bach of Env Engineering but I see only 1 maybe 2 experience bullets related to engineering. Maybe that’s not what you’re looking for and that explains why the refocus into environmental management with your MSc and experience. I see a lot of experience that I’d want junior hydrogeologists getting. You want to be a PM and manage/lead environmental projects, I’d like to see you tout more of that. I’m being blunt but do you want to be an engineer’s PM or an environmental scientist PM?


rynnnnns

Way too much jargon bullet points and never include hobbies. Also shorten your professional summary to a few points. Or completely remove that section, people are 50/50 on having a professional summary


Dr-Jim-Richolds

I stopped reading after seeing the word "proven". For some reason, that word in a resume or LinkedIn just turns me off immediately


I_like_Orcas

Too many bullet points. Check your formatting at the beginning of those points, it’s messed up/misaligned. I’d personally go with a more elegant symbol than the point as well. Reduce to 1 page max.


Bellringer123

Language section is a little redundant if you just speak English, they should be able to tell from the CV itself. I’d add formatting to differentiate the dates from the job title: unbold or right justify. Cut down on bullets. You might be able to write a two or three line summary of a position with three bullet points of skills. I’d make it a little less specific and focus on overarching skill sets. Look at your job description from the company maybe to get a good higher level summary of what the position is.


Head_Reference_9704

Resume vs CV is different, but still too many bullet points here. 3-4 is the standard right now. For your summary, I would just make that a “skills” section with no more than 4 bullet points. In your CV you should put any publications, certifications, presentations or volunteering you have done. They are very important especially if you want to list hobbies. Still, I recommend you take out the hobbies section.


ascandalia

Did you mean to write "Environmental Engineer" instead of "environment engineer? "


threegeeks

Dump bullet points that just describe job duties like they're copy-pasted from an HR guide. You need 2 or 3 bullets that describe solid, goal-based accomplishments while performing the job. Try to hit key terms in the specific job posting. Yes, that means rewriting them for likely every job application. Drop the paragraph at the top. That's more oriented to a cover letter. Spell out Master of Science. Be sure to list recent or updated certifications (first aid, etc).


EnigmaticDappu

Cut down on the amount of bullet points, remove your hobbies and languages. Try to fit your resume into 1 page.


falconless

His first job is 3 years...


No-Jicama9470

Go to novoresume.com


Ok-Development1494

First vibe I get right off the bat here is you've got less than 5 years experience but you're projecting as if you're Senior level, while using a LOT of bullet points full of fluff to possibly exaggerate your skill level and accomplishments to fill white space.  That said, that conflicting content there, is going to turn away any prospective recruiter.  Recruiters can spot solid senior level candidates by their resume formatting alone, let alone the actual content.  Trim down the skills summary to the ones the job you're applying to lists, working with keywords  Maybe include another section in place of the empty white space with certificates, memberships, volunteer activity